Editing Project Part 3 (Sidelines Errors)

Incorrect: Burks led the way Sunday with a even par (72) for one of the best rounds of her collegiate career. Overall, she tied for 29th in the field.

Correct: Burks led the way Sunday with an even par (72) for one of the best rounds of her collegiate career. Overall, she tied for 29th in the field.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/03/womens-golf-blue-raiders-finish-7th-at-mountain-view-collegiate/

Incorrect: The Blue Raiders will look to bring home back-to-back victories when they travel to Clarksville take on the Austin Peay Governors next on Wednesday. The first pitch is set for 4 p.m.

Correct: The Blue Raiders will look to bring home back-to-back victories when they travel to Clarksville to take on the Austin Peay Governors next on Wednesday. The first pitch is set for 4 p.m.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/softball-jennings-smith-lead-blue-raiders-to-7-2-victory-over-belmont/

Incorrect: Middle Tennessee State University students flocked to Murphy Center in the bunches for this year’s traditional spring semester concert, put on by SPARE.

Correct: Middle Tennessee State University students flocked to Murphy Center in bunches for this year’s traditional spring semester concert, put on by SPARE.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/rappers-lil-yachty-blackbear-blow-the-roof-off-murphy-center-for-mtsu-spring-concert/

Incorrect: On the mound for the Raiders in the opening games was senior Jake Wyrick (1-1), who coming off a dominating performance against Old Dominion on Mar. 30 where he fanned ten batters. 

Correct: On the mound for the Raiders in the opening game was senior Jake Wyrick (1-1), who coming off a dominating performance against Old Dominion on Mar. 30 where he fanned ten batters. 

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/baseball-blue-raiders-swept-by-marshall-in-thundering-herd/

Incorrect: When all as said and done, they fell in game two by a final score of 10-1.

Correct: When all is said and done, they fell in game two by a final score of 10-1.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/softball-blue-raiders-swept-in-doubleheader-at-no-20-kentucky/

Incorrect: Information regarding tickets, lineup, and more can be found at the festival’s website.

Correct: Information regarding tickets, the lineup, and more can be found at the festival’s website.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/03/pilgrimage-music-festival-announces-2018-lineup/

Incorrect: The witness also said that, at approximately 2:30 a.m. on Sunday, he heard two loud bangs come from the street.

Correct: The witness also said that at approximately 2:30 a.m. on Sunday, he heard two loud bangs come from the street.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/crime-murfreesboro-police-respond-to-shooting-on-dudley-street/

Incorrect: The first question that Hennessee asked was for both sides to explain their party’s position on gun control

Correct: The first question that Hennessee asked was for both sides to explain their parties position on gun control

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/03/college-republicans-democrats-host-policy-debate-at-mtsu/

Incorrect: In his time at MTSU, Miller developed a strong relationship former Head Coach Kermit Davis.

Correct: In his time at MTSU, Miller developed a strong relationship with former Head Coach Kermit Davis.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/03/hype-to-humble-how-chase-miller-has-managed-to-stay-levelheaded-during-his-blue-raider-tenure/

Incorrect: Precious Birdsong scored on an error from Charlotte and that was all the Blue Raiders needed ro sweep the doubleheader, as they won game two by a final score of 4-1.

Correct: Precious Birdsong scored on an error from Charlotte and that was all the Blue Raiders needed to sweep the doubleheader, as they won game two by a final score of 4-1.

Link: http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/03/softball-blue-raiders-take-2-of-3-from-49ers-in-weekend-set/

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